Yipcks's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smile]

me likey

[Night in the Woods - Waiting For a Friend]

wait, this isn't a screenshot of the game? xD

Bleak-Creep responds:

Haha, thanks! Definitely aiming for the same style/vibe and I had plenty of references. :)

[Faerie]

I love how they look very insect like.

The render is very good as well u.u

[Zi Dance]

Quite good.

I like the colours and how polished it is.

A few things to improve upon: her body moving just doesn't feel right, plus her boobs bounce incorrectly as if they have their own motion. You could improve by looking at actual footage of that movement, maybe record yourself doing the movement.

Another thing is her design, I find it quite generic.

notzackforwork responds:

Okay.

Def needed more reference.

Generic design, okay. Just keeping her simple for the animation.

[VEGETA - All Transformations]

Duude!

That animation was really well made.

Love the movement of the hair and all.

One thing you could have improved, was to change his expression depending on the transformation, but overall, really amazing.

Chris-Vassilico responds:

Thanks so much! Yeah, looking at it now, I wish I would've added expressions and such. Lol.

[Escaping Emily Shot 4]

Wow, I love that black n' white style, really good.

The details and lines are very well made, the animation is fluid as well.

The only thing you could improve is on that walk cycle, it seems to be a little bit rough.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2y6aVz0Acx0

This video shows how to make a simple walk cycle.

Hyped for your movie mate!

JoeliusNG responds:

Thanks for the help!

[Space Dalmatian]

Love those colours! Really well made painting and idea as well.

You could work a little bit more on the dogs pose, his neck seems very stiff you know.

I've seem some of your other paintings, you have quite an eye for soft paintings.

Just work more on your backgrounds, they can really make your painting go from simple to professional.

Keep up the great work mate!

captnushii responds:

Thanks for the advice! I'll definitely try working on my backgrounds.

[Best Space Bro]

Wow, i really like that manga sketchy style of your drawing.

One thing you could try, is using some dynamic shadows in your drawings, it would make them pop out more.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OoLdiaOETpA

This video explain that really well.

Keep up the great work mate!

AlainArtStuff responds:

Thank you ^^

I'm saving that video here to watch later

[[Don´t deal with the Devilman]]

Man, I really enjoy your style, i checked out your website and all,
really great.

One thing that you could work on a little bit more, is your composition, even though this piece is really good, if you worked on the composition, your art could easily become part in a card game or something.

Keep up the great work mate!

FDiazContin responds:

OMG!, Thank you!, Yeah the composition sometimes it´s really dificult too me :/ Luckily I'm studying arts and over time I'm going to polish those mistakes :)

[Vertigo]

Wow, gotta love that perspective.

gud job!